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frustration




So many years of utter frustration....
They gave of their lives as we gave up our nation,
no promise to keep every question been asked,
we did nothing wrong yet still they attacked.

So much for your freedom your democratic choice,
when you take of our heritage you take of our voice.
Alone i will wait till my time it is due,
back with my soul-mate our vows to renew,
no respect of the man with the starched white collar
off now we go....
on to Valhalla

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fair well and good luck in your next life

option four.

Hope you dont mind i'm not a woman

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  • ZachP gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    Something thought provoking and powerful,
    a wonderful write, to say the very least


    thank you for entering, and good luck


  • LittleMoon silver member
    January 10, 2008
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    This write is full of deep feelings of past events still very much in the minds of many


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 10, 2008

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    Very well written and with understanding...the heart of a woman is so much the same yet in the case some different...thank you my friend so much for sharing with me...and no I don't mind you not being a woman...