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hold you

I feel you tremble as i kiss your lips,
A steady thrusting of your hips,
Our clothes scattered over the floor,
Ive never felt like this before,
Your warm breath on my skin,
Hold me close, Feel me within,
Your eyes are screaming pleasure,
Your nails scratch my chest,
I can feel you cumming,
Our bodies drenched in sweat,
Now its all over,
Let me hold you for a while,
You know it make me weak,
When I see your gorgeous smile.

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    January 4, 2008
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    oohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


    Now if I wasn't a taken women this is exactly what I would want another man to do to me

    and yes I do have a gorgeous smile, so the ending was my fav

    Thank you for a very HOTT and HORNY write

    I wish you the best of luck in the contest


    Cindy