She runs down the hall
Into her bed room
She shuts and locks the door
Then begans to pace
But falls to her knees
Her head in her hands
Crying, she thinks
'I must leave this place'
She reaches under the bed
Takes hold of the knife
Touches the cold point
To her skin
Presses down hard
Then slowly drags the blade
Cutting through her veins
As the dying begins
The cut is done
What's left is the wait
And she is thinking of you
As she lies on the floor
It's not your fault why she did it
She knew you loved her
It was life and the world
She could take no more
Her breathing is week now
The blood stains the carpet
And she knows what she's done
Has only hurt you
And she's sorry so sorry
That she couldn't be strong
Just remember one thing
She will always love you
Now the moment has come
She takes her last breath
Her body turns cold
And her heart beats no more
Slilence is the sound of death
Darkness is the sight
And her body is there
She lies dead on the floor
Author notes
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*MCR*
'A Suicide Story'
A contest entry
- ==Dark Contest,Lots of options!!!== by xXsoulxcollectorXx.
550 points, ended February 11, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the black hole were your soul used to be by nobody knows me.
750 points, ended February 23, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thankyou for entering my contest good luck
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arsome
nice rythem
keep writting -
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I do wish you had followed the rules of the contest. I enjoyed your write, however, it appears to have nothing to do with H.P. Lovecraft or his works. Thank you for entering. Perhaps you could be inspired by Lovecraft and enter something else. -
very nice write,but please read rule # 9,i love these kinds of poems,thanks for entering the contest...
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i liked it alot. i understand that feeling.
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beautiful poem i like your darkness...
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I LOVE IT
Great poem. It's very deep and you caried so much emotion through it and the rhyming sounds so pretty. I could feel suspention in it too. It really is like a story. It's gotta be the best poem I have ever read.
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