Each waking moment, I fight for you.
Darkness pulling, the battle ensues.
Beneath my wings, you are my wind.
if not for you, it would never begin.
My love for you, feeds me to fight.
Without you, my illness would ignite.
Ignite with power, Impossible to defeat.
Your wind in my soul, is power to compete.
My strength builds, with each smile or hug.
Within your arms, my spirit feels snug.
I'm soaring now, with monstrous worth.
Bless my saviors, my angels on earth.
Nichole A.Dustin (C)
1/04/2008
Author notes
Song 22 "Wind beneath my Wings"
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
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beautiful picture
i loved this line 'I'm soaring now, with monstrous worth'.
thank you for your entry and good luck
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I recall sitting like in the photograph holding my girls when they were still little; the feeling was overwhelming, I guess not just for me, but also to those witnessing the event. These are causes worth fighting for indeed. I wish you good spirits in fighting the disease and that images like these may give you a lot of strength. Thank you for creating and sharing and good luck in the contest. Take care,
AD
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incredible!
so beautifully written. this is gold material fo sho!LOL!
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I love this one!
Very nice flow, and visuals. I am proud of you for your progress in your writing. you are one of the strongest people I know, hang in there babe.
O, by the way I love my video if I haven't told you all ready. Very creative!
hugz~Melanie
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I love this poem so much, and I can't say I understand because I haven't ever truely felt this way, but I hear where you're coming from. I can almost feel that pain you're in. GREAT WRITE. You have a true talent. Keep it up and GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!
Peace~
Danny
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I just loved this piece..I also love the picture of your babies..They are beautiful..You are blessed for sure.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Blessings always,
Soulful Woman
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this is good
really good
i like the carryover from the third to the fourth line
for some reaso
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