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Cleansing Blood

Broken spirit, concealed from my loves.
Released through the blood of my pen.
Consolation in sonnet.

Nichole A.Dustin (C)
 1/04/2008


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Prompt 16 words from the picture

My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 16, 2008

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    Beautifully penned - love the italics, placed in perfect spot. Thanks for entering & sharing.



  • Prison of Lyme
    January 8, 2008
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    interesting

    what is sonnet mean I am curious?

    call a chick, he is gone to poker till late.

    k?


  • SilencefillsMySoul
    January 8, 2008

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    Excellent

    very excellent. I loved the bloodied pen picture you used in this. Thank you for sharing. These 16 words say a lot. I can feel the pain hidden behind this piece. I hope I'm not misjudging this. Take care. Great write!!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 6, 2008
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    Another beauty. Your pen holds so much power..Never let that go astray..
    Soulful Woman