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winter

 


seeding beneath
ripe and ready
another breech

another stretch
incubation
another mutation


chrysalis,
dilation.


the break of water
the wake of winter
  
the hatchett
the rake

scapel, rape

 

minced meat

minced onion

minced words.

 

 

fertile  enough now

to sow

a real garden

 

in snow

let it snow

let it snow

let it snow

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Balashi13
    June 16

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    I like this. My favorite line is "the wake of winter" because as I get older the more I hate the snow and cold!

    • hyacinthgirl silver member
      June 16
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      thanks

      cold gets harder every year for me. I dread it even now. Thanks for your comment.

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 17

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    I like this a lot. Keep writing. Fast-paced and very descriptive. Well done.

    Dark Love
    Wayne Leon


  • account disabled
    January 26
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    I like this