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[ The tears on my face, ]

The tears on my face,
Have fallen so much
They've started to draw me a pattern


You left without a warning
Left me here wondering where you are
I never said I love you
But I always did,
If you are dead, may god forbid
I ask you to tell me,
For my heart is longing for peace,

You left behind you, a family
That loved you
More than they told you they did

I sit here, helpless,
Just like a little child,
No clue what to think,
No clue why you are gone

You've met your fate,
And I sit here with mine

The meet with you I picture everyday
My tears will dry
My heart will die
But I don’t know if you'll ever come back…


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  • googe
    January 8, 2008
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    thankyou for this poem,your words touch my heart,this is exatly how i feel.


  • Just passing by
    January 3, 2008

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    WOW!!!!

    Its so sad. I feel for u.
    Its very well written.
    Good work. Great poem. One thing, "the meet with you" seems a little off. I really like it though.