If only you could see deep down in my soul
If only....
If only you could see through my darkend eyes
If only.....
If only you could see past this degrading disguise
If only......
If only you hear the words my lips shout
If only.......
If only you could taste the blood upon my tongue
If only........
If only you could feel the beat within my lung
If only.........
If only you could cry my tears and feel my emotion
If only..........
If only you were me you could feel my devotion
Author notes
if only u could see into my soul
A contest entry
- options by burdenbytruth.
600 points, ended January 23, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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love it!
i love this poem its great! good job... i love the emotion in the write and i love the way it just seems to fit perfectley together. amazzing job. i love the emotion and the longing and the pain. this is an amazing write thank you for entering and good luck.
this would have to be my favorite line
"If only you could cry my tears and feel my emotion"
i love how true it is and how relatable it is like i feel like this all the time like if only they could feel my emotion or how they hurt me they would take it back. great job -
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Thank You
Thank you very much for the feedback, I appreacheate it very much
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