It's surprising what's changed...
It's surprising what's not...
Last year,
one heartbreak,
new friends,
bad personality...
Some things are still the same,
and some aren't...
This year,
one heartache,
new personality,
and, luckily, the most of the same friends...
A year has come, and a year has gone
yet all the years are all the same
just a little bit older,
a little bit more mature,
a little bit wiser,
and a lot more determined to change.
This time, last year...
sometimes I wish I could go back...
A contest entry
- This Time Last Year by photay.poetry.
400 points, ended January 13, 2008, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is really great. its really true
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That is a really good poem. It brings up a really good point.
Awesome write -
nice...
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This poem is absolutely amazing. I hope you win the contest, you deserve it.
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Thank you. Glad you think so. =)
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