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[ What is to become of me? ]

What is to become of me?
What is to become of you?

Oh, my love.
I can not take care of you.
I do not know
what it is I should do.

Where do we go from here?
What do I say?
How can I admit
I have turned the other way?

How will you ever know
That I love you, so?

Author notes

I penned this some time ago, and still it inspiers tears.
I doubt it is what you are trully looking for as I have a deep love of rhym.
I have entered because these words some up my deepest feelings of "guilt."
I hope you have a great contest!

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  • Danna Hobart
    January 18
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    This inspires tears from you because you know what it is about. As a reader, I feel left out in the cold, not knowing why it is that you can not take care of this other person. What have you turned the other way from? But of course, you may not be ready to write about those things.

    Thank you for entering.


  • genevieve3
    January 17
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    Its not about adoption, allthough Im glad my words can be so universal.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    My heart goes out to you

    One day they will know and if you gave this precious child up for adoption then bless your heart .Myself not ever being able to have a child and so want one so badly know that one day that child will find you and will know of the love you had


  • liduen silver member
    March 15, 2008
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    Wow! This is wonderful! This is a very emotional peice. Good luck in the contest!


  • vici377
    January 3, 2008

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    so heartfelt

    i can feel the emotion in this write..Where do we go from here?
    What do I say?
    How can I admit
    I have turned the other way?

    so full of pain and sadness..I am so sorry..for why you are hurting so..if you need a friend..i am here..you know that don't you?..you get 5 *****'s from me and of course 3 clappies..lol..

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