The plugs that fit the roads in our brain
electrifies a puzzled city
as our skull canopies were made as a box
that cannot go past the perimeters
to not exhaust ourselves holding it up.
Now, we have to try to not tip
with getting lost
in how to understand
the streets of complexity
under the simple head
with even tunnels into the eyes.
Author notes
3. Avenues in the mind.
In a list
A contest entry
- For those who run contests II by penman.
1750 points, ended January 4, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Excellent poem
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Beautiful take on the prompt from the other contest. I think ts amazing. Got my brain thinking. maybe though you should work on the title, make i creatve it will add to your great poem
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Nicely done - captivating and very intriguing indeed. A good work on from the provided prompt.
Thanks for entering.
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Congrats on the Silver!
Well deserved!
Write on...
*PEACE ON EARTH*
Happy New Year!
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oh...dear...me!!!
what a splendid write this is!
and you are ELEVEN years old?
oh my goodness...I am so impressed!
great job...your talent far exceeds your years...
very well done!
congrats on the silver trophy...
you are a wonder dear one!
Blessings! Tammy
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Wonderful
Very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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Great take of the prompt I like it especially the last line
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I forgot I said that lol, but oh yes I liked it too. Thanks for deepening that for me to go see what my last verse was. And, it is sweet of you to put my specific poem on a level of keying on.
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Wonderful take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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