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Beautiful Curse

i am the beautiful curse
everything i touch
i damage
i can't keep anything alive
or watch it grow
it always fades away
i hurt the people
i care about most
i can't stop this agony
i vow to not let anyone
get close to me
for fear that i might
steal their life away
i need someone here
to contradict my
beautiful contridiction
this beautiful curse
i have become
is slowly taking me under
this curse is undying
never ending
it will linger inside me
long after i am gone
no one should have to
endure this pain
this torture
all i wanted was
compassion and
understanding
yet, this is what
i have been given

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AP name-- beautifulcurse

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  • Galaxy2
    January 12, 2008

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    There is a touch of humanity in the poem.

    Great lines---
    'I am the beautiful curse
    Everything I touch
    I damage
    ..........
    I hurt the people
    I care about most'
    ..........
    I wow to not let anyone
    Get close to me
    For fear that I might
    Steal their life away.'

    You're so humane and sweet that I must get closer to you even if my life is stolen.

    You're great, my love!

    Galaxy2

  • miss.homicide
    January 4, 2008

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    awesome poem,Seriously it feels like i can relate.New to the site and this is the best poem ive read yet