Hello Razor, my old friend.
I need to use you once again.
I thought that maybe I could leave you,
But now I realize that I need you;
The anger that I feel
Is too profound,
I can’t cool down.
I need…
Your bloody silence.
And maybe it is wrong of me,
To use my pain to make me free.
But the pain that lies inside
Cannot compare
To skin I tear
I need…
Your bloody silence.
Those who love me, please just know,
The blade’s a friend, it’s not a foe.
That I will stop is what you hope,
But this is what I do to cope.
You say the pen is mightier than my blade
But what I need…
Is bloody silence.
Author notes
kinda morbid, i hope its not too dark.
A contest entry
- Gold Anyone? by loveisthemoment.
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Comments
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this is good dark too thanks for entering
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I think the usage of figurative language is really great in this poem (refering to the blade as a friend) and the poem flows very well. It's very creative and well-written!
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hmm... its good. thanks for entering!
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i really liked it. i can relate. relly good poem!
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Very creative antidote. Flows nicely. Pretty sad/sick topic you picked. I hope it is not on a personal note. . .Good job poeticly. Keep the pen flowing!
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That was very good. I know a lot of people can relate to this peice. Nice write!
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awesome
I AGREE COMPLETELY
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this is beautiful and it really tells exactly how I'm feeling right now. I love the raw emotion put into it. wow... you're a poetic genius
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this is so sad, i hope you realise their are other ways to cope althought to you the blade is ur friend...
At times life is hell but there is always other ways to get through other then hurting your self...
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