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Mr. and Mrs. Macbeth

The sun fell out of the sky tonight
for dizzying hunger.

I couldn't taste the night.

The stars refused to whisper today
for smothering yokes and serpentine gags.

I couldn't stain the day.

The clock froze silver frostbite
for fear of mewing the minutes (seconds – moons) away.

I couldn't swim the hour.

Now, my dear –

my champagne laughter,
my moon filled plate,
my waxing wane,
my catnip dream,

I keep time by your hand.

Author notes

Focusing on the idea that love destroys conventional concepts of time.

Champagne laughter is not mine...

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  • Namita
    January 4, 2008

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    you have a way with words - you string them together in such a beautiful way... amazing work

    - namita


    • demetrah10
      January 4, 2008
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      Thank you so much . Your comments are always so appreciated, as I LOVE your work.