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x Ich Hasse x {Senyru to MS}

Ich habt dich gehasst
Du bist sehr boese und blod
Ich bin muede nunc

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Written November 7th, 2003

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  • txtbkpropaganda
    November 15, 2003
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    ??

    It's in german!! Help me!! I don't take german!

    Altavista (all good things come from here!) says it means so:
    I have you hated// you are very bad and blod// I am tired nunc .

    What? It sounds like somebody needs to check her german spelling!

    Pah. Whatever. I've got a poem in french that almost nobody understands, but me! Wee! It's a secret!

    - -Will you sleep tonight? Will you think of me? (Boxcar Racer.)- -
    OPIUMMM KITTN

  • Beav
    November 9, 2003
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    nice poem i love german even though i dont speak it- i really wish i could because i can only speak korean english and french. but anyway poems in foreign languages are the best!! that is if theres also a translation, which thank God you put or id be staring at my dumb and staring at my monitor and drooling. God work, the background somehow fits with the poem.

  • Kerbi
    November 9, 2003
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    Sehr Gut! lmao

    Heck yeah i can understand it! And i'm only in German III! Lol. It says something like "I have hated you/you are evil and dumb/ i am tired now" Right?? Lol hope so

    Thanks for your comments on my work, btw, and if you'd like to read more of my poetry you can read it at fictionpress.com/~kerbi (i mentioned that in a reply to your review on revelation but i dont know if you saw it, )

    ~Kerbi


  • Scarlett silver member
    November 8, 2003
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    Translation:

    I have been hating you
    You are very mean and stupid
    I'm so tired now

    When translated...I'm not sure if it is a ku...but in German it is...

    !~YS4e~!
    Scarlett

  • Confused Gemini
    November 7, 2003
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    ok i dont know how to speak german so i am not really gonna comment on it hehe

    Gem

  • MysticRoseTears
    November 7, 2003
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    Im going to guess its about someone you dont like...but then agian i could be wrong....

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