im just here
looking
wondering
where am i?
im the only one here
i scream my lungs out
no answer
i start to cry
no one to comfort me
iv exepted that they have left me
and there not here no more
its only me and my
silly little head
thinking
dreaming away
what should i do?
what should i say?
nothing
comes back
both times
an echo
i have never herd before
i look up and wonder
why are you doing this to me
i scream
"u finally got what you wanted"
then i brake down and cry
" just leave me alone thats all i wanted"
"just leave"
as i still cry
im there on the floor
looking into the dark lonley sky
as no stars are there
only the moon
as it looks like theres blood on it
i put my hand over my heart
its slowly dieing
of this heart brake
you caused me
for everyone i had
to leave me
"finally"
it came to me from a voice
i havnt herd
as i lay there wondering what it means
but as my heart slowly comes back to life
i wonder
im thinking
everything comes clear
i wake up from my dream
as i learned my lesson
to trust
the people you love
ur family
that does everything for you
to live
to love
and just to be happy
never think your alone
because as u think you are
you have ur family right there
watching everthing you do
it might not seem that they care
but deep down there crying
for you and want you to get better
they want you to know they love you
and they do care
so trust people
with your heart
trust your family
dont be lonley
by not trying to make it work
give it a chance and
live
love
feel
explore
cry
learn
TRUST!!!!
--Johnnia l.
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This is a great poem. There are some spelling and grammer problems, but those are little things that a little proofreading can fix. The message of this poem is fantastic. This really hit home for me. Thanks for sharing this beautiful write.
~ Bright Smyles
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Great , Wonderful
This was a wonderful write. I love the way that you have written this poem. You did such a great job! I really see and the full the emotion in this poem! great job again
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great poem !
full of emotion,
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good poem.
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this is a wonderful write and something that i could relate to. the questions caught my attention and made me stop and think wel done
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yes you have to learn
to trust someone. Loneliness is oft a self imposed exile inside ones own mind. That is the saddest prison of all. Well done and good advice at the end. God bless you, Mark
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