Why do I do the things I do?
I'm not sure why
But I do know I do it for you
Everything I do somehow ends in a reason about you
Never for me
Always for you
I wanted out of the Navy
But you won't let me
You talked me into staying
And because I love you so much
Staying with it I must
You brought up a good point
Said something about comittment
I made a comittment to the Navy, and if I break it
Then what am I going to do to you?
I want to be comitted to you
So this is something I must do
so you see everything I do I do it for you
Thats not all I do
I do so much more
And with everything I do
I do it ALL for you!!
Author notes
I chose Bryan Adams - Everything I Do (I Do It For You)
because it fits my relationship so well!
A contest entry
- This is going to be another OPTIONS Contest! Come on in all & enter by PureRomance.
670 points, ended January 23, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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Everything I Do (I Do it for You)...girl you chose a good one this time, I love the way your poem reads. I think you should let him read it,
and see what he says...I love this poem though because it was beautifully expressed! Good luck in the contest!
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This is very good. and Everything I DO (I Do It For You) That's a very good one! I love it!
keep up your amazing work! best of luck in the contest! I think I'm going to bookmark this poem!!!
Crimson -
Good job hun, you did well with the imagery of speech. *big hug* this was well written of emotions. Good luck in the contest
much love
~~Tori~~
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