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To Muse

To muse amuse by ploy defuse
Hidden truths imageries confuse
Falling to rippling ponds
Such willing prawns helpless pawns
To muse befits the muse as
She doth bemuse

Traveling via prisms dancing on moonbeams
Invincible, invisible
Lost to mortal sight embraced a mere trace
As a heartbeats delight cascading
Upon a waterfall a host a ghost

Wings to fly in each horizon's why
Magical her wand embellished
The answers ever so slightly shy

Capturing nature's hues
The solitary stance
As a dandelion would dance
Each emblem a truth as
The pixie muse ignites
Our fuse!

A secret pan evolving the span
Galactic quasar the fan
Cherubic cupids romantic antics
Ingratiated fanatics
Brought to life by pen and strife
Humanities heroics

Legend nor lore would she reside
At your very door?
Have ye felt the wrench?
O' such a wicked wench!
High tide did ye abide
Embraced with the muse
A shadow at your side!


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  • myrataal silver member
    January 9, 2008

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    Simply such a gorgeous write!

    And yes ... I giggled all the way down this two-stepped dance of you and your muse! THIS is the playful pen of true poetry!

    Love to you, Friend.

    Myra


    • Mystical-Gardenia
      January 9, 2008
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      Hello Dear Myra!

      I'm delighted you took the time to stop by and share your warm, always welcome comments and most generous applause your visit I'm greatful you found measured in playful thoughts to generate your spirit in joy Thank you for being such a faithful friend

      Love, Peace, Joy, Blessings, Wisdom,

      To You and yours

      Have a glorious day you have made mine


  • maa gold member
    January 5, 2008

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    I am exactly at the same wavelength with margaret here ... I had the same feeling of lighthearted yet profound playfulness and the sparkling touch of fairies ...

    a masterpiece !

    marion

    • Mystical-Gardenia
      January 5, 2008
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      Hello Marion,

      Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and share your warm, insightful, comments and most generous applause I'm delighted you came to play for a while with the faries and imps We all need to get away for awhile

      ~Myst~


  • klassy lassy
    January 4, 2008

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    canted alchemy

    You capture the magic of muse in this perfectly, methinks! Mine sometimes makes me wait interminably for her favor and those "prisms dancing on moonbeam" and those "heartbeats delight cascading upon a waterfall" (or words in windfall)!


  • MargaretG
    January 4, 2008

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    playful

    This is pure and exuberant imagination, with a lot of word play. It makes me think you have fairies in your cupboards! Have a great day!

    • Mystical-Gardenia
      January 4, 2008
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      Hello Margaret!

      Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and share your warm, wise, insightful, comments always so welcome! I'm delighted you enjoyed your visit and scattered the little faries out of the cupboards

      Wishing you and yours much success in all of your endeavors

      s'

      ~Myst~


  • Gypsie Ink
    January 3, 2008
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    A muse ing!

    "O' such a wicked wench!" they so generally are! I love it!

    • Mystical-Gardenia
      January 3, 2008
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      Hello Gypsy!

      So very nice of you to pop in indeed who else would so enjoy a "musing" but the little gypsy imp who plucks life from every form

      Wishing you a glorious New Year!!

      ~Myst~

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