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Life

Pushing and pulling,
tugging at the mold.
The fabric fraying away,
but they stay strong.

The motion of life itself.

A contest entry

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    A really interesting entry, although I had trouble understanding your 4th line!
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene;f