I have seen you
Back into my skull
Where you always reside
Haunting, fighting, torturing me
It burns when I see you
If you only knew
How you taste when I follow you home
Dark, so dark
And you don't even know
That I see you, that I feel you
I never wanted to hurt you, but you had to scream
Your other lips are now around your neck
I love the way you feel right now, the way you taste
I never meant it to be this way
But they wont let me
As I stand there waiting, listening
for something I have only one thing in my skull
Your body is taking me by storm
I don't know how else to act
I am a good man
a good person
But this perversion is too much
As my body becomes like fire
As I see you fully
for everything you are
As fate would have it I met you
Why did you have to scream?
You didn't have to be so lovely.
A contest entry
- Inside the Mind of Madness by Synthetic-Nightmare.
1500 points, ended January 25, 2008, 34 entries
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Comments
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A fab dark piece, very well constructed and thought out. Superbly done, good luck in the contest
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YAY!!!!
THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR!
^_^
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!! Thanks so much for your entry, it greatly expresses the maddened, deranged mind of a psychopath. KUDOS TO YOU and best of wishes
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