Are you their still inside?
Or are you turning into someone I don’t know
Will there be room for me?
With this new you
Im smiling as you tell me
That you’re changing
Into what you used to be
But I can’t help wondering and fearing
Will you still want me?
Will you still hold me in your heart?
I know the answers yes
You never will stop loving me
But I can’t help feeling
Im losing you
What will happen?
To me
Author notes
i hope this is ok sweetheart
i love you so much
promt The feeling of losing a loved one,not knowing were they are.
In a list
A contest entry
- I feel you will never return to me by googe.
600 points, ended January 8, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful write angel thankyou
good luck I love you
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This conveys alot of emotion for a short write... is beautifully expressed. It tugs at the emotions of the reader feeling your confusion and longing. Excellent take on the prompt... excellent write
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this is a really good write hun keep up the good work and best of luck in the contest.
love ya sis
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This is really good sweety you have done a fine job with this thank you for sharing this with me goodluck to you in the contest best wishes
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This is amazing sweetie. I love it. Best of luck in the contest. Much love always.
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wow sis an amazing take on the prompt and is so powerfully penned. i love the emotion and the question within it. well done and best of luck
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