Reka my lovely senorita i am so glad i have met ya
I have only just begun to know you
But it seems I've falling in love with you
Its hard to let you how I'm feeling
But it seems like a dream come true
I know at times you think I'm cheating on you
But in time you will see my love for you is real
So when you meet me I'm sure my eyes will tell you the truth
I imagine the first time i hold and kiss you
That you will see endless possibilities for me and you
Please tell me what you think i am new at this stuff
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ok fixed it sorry i took so long
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L2 "begun"
L3 "I'm"
L4 "let you know how"
L5 "true"
L7 "real" instead of "true" to prevent the repetition from L5
L8 "I'm" and "truth"
L9 "first"
Just a few minor corrections, tpos
This is an expressive piece relaying a message of sincerity to the woman you love. It's sweet and your lady will surely appreciate it
Thank you for sharing.
La x
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