It happened again,
my life line is broken.
My sudden, shattering colapse,
a red, unchosen path.
Author notes
16 words. Picture inspired.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired - 16 words - 16 entries [I] by Naridill.
300 points, ended January 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Not sure I like the use of 'red' as a metaphor but apart from that - this piece was written beautifully.
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