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Gee-up!

A woman I know from Lahore,
found her husband a bit of a bore.
She decided a horse
would be better, of course--
but you don't want to read any more!

A contest entry

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  • secberm
    February 18, 2008

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    I've tested and tried, every form of poetry. From sonnet to haiku, senryu, and ethree to patya vat. But limmerick, as much as I'd like to laugh, I one form of that's always managed to kick my as a matter of fact... LOL One, brother.

    Dez


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    Many thank Bill for your limerick. Please join us in the next contest.

    Sue and Jeff


  • micol
    January 5, 2008
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    Nice--you get to have it both ways. PG-rated reading and X- (or XXX-)rated imagination.


  • WolfHeart
    January 3, 2008
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    LOL - clever and funny!!

    Woflie


  • Keith
    January 3, 2008

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    Oh yes I do! Lahore sort of leads you in one direction...but you avoided the obvious. She wasn't married to Calligula by any chance?


  • Sunshine Always
    January 3, 2008
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    Choke, snigger!! Wouldn't know what you mean Bill... Great limerick though..Good luck...mal

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