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Unlike You

I like someone else
He's sweet, he's cute, he's not you.
Unlike you he doesn't checkout other people
Unlike you he'd never hurt me
Unlike you he doesn't lie
He's my best friend
Truth is
He likes me to
He's there for me, unlike you.
I think I love him
Thats the truth
I never meant to hurt you.

Please tell me what you think

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  • only1love4ever
    June 5, 2008

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    Oh wow

    Sometimes we are struck with this struggle and nothing to do. I guess that it is to take it one day at a time because somethings we can't help. ANd other things we just can't change. I guess things play out the way they are truly supposed to be.

    God bless you..
    Thank you so much for the comment.
    Have a great day.
    ~Only1love4ever


  • GettingPlayed09
    January 4, 2008
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    I like it this reminds me of my ex

  • thehunter
    January 3, 2008

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    A ballad of conflicting emotion it seems...
    The tone is rather sharp and berating, right up until that last line...but that just lends credence to the rest of the poem.
    Simple...short...and incredibly powerful! Well done!