This lonely town
has no people.
It hides away from the world
because the people stole its soul a long time ago.
Deserted it stands
in the middle of no where.
Waiting for someone
to come make it a town again.
People pass by
and see it in its solitary confinement.
But one day
this town will be full of people once more.
Author notes
hidingxeveryday
Concentration
http://yamamura.deviantart.com/art/Concentration-57648854
I really didn't have a clue what to say for this picture so that's what I came up with. It will not win. haha. ( =
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest (January) by Denierim.
1000 points, ended February 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I kind of like this piece. You potrayed the picture really really well and showed the emptiness of the town with your words. It is a bit simple, but all in all tells a great story. I actually like the ending, how after all that emptiness you added some hope there. That one brought a small smile on my face and that's a very very good thing.
So, taken you didn't have a clue what to say for this picture, you did a good job.
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