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Who Am I ?


Who am I ?
I look in the mirror at me
I don't recognize what i see
Things have happened,
Things have changed,
I'm not who i used to be
I'm not who i know as me,
So many small changes
so many all together,

I don't look the same, I'm different
a new face a new person,
I don't know me, not any more
I'm no longer really sure
of myself and who i am,

I'm a stranger i have to get to know
im not who i was so long ago,
i don't know who i am any more

i need to find out before

i lose all that i was
i don't know myself, and if i don't who dose?


Who am I ?

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I looked in the mirror an realized I barely knew myself any more, scary eh?

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  • Sun-shiney
    December 14, 2008

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    i like

    who am i ,the one standing here who am i that stands in fear who am i to feel sorry for him who am i to even speak. who am i can u even see?


  • Ebbing.X.Discreetly
    August 19, 2008

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    Wow, very realistic indeed...something we all pass through at one point in time...very flowing and nicely written...Great job, I especially loved the first stanza and the frequent repetition of certain words...Wonderful!!!


  • broken-angel
    May 29, 2008

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    Who am I ?
    I look in the mirror at me
    I don't recognize what i see
    Things have happened,
    Things have changed,
    I'm not who i used to be
    I'm not who i know as me,

    can realte to this so much, great write hun xx


  • William Vercelli
    February 1, 2008

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    You are asking a question that we all ask ourselves but never admit that we ask it, and I think this poem is very brave as you are facing how you feel. I understand what you are trying to say in this poem as you go over this mind boggling question that when we begin asking it, it never seems to end.


  • Charity Ann
    February 1, 2008
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    I think this could be a song. It's very rhythmic and very natural. As I read it, I couldn't help but think of how the words just must have poured out of you like water. Very nice flow. Also, I liked the content. I think a lot of people come to this point in their lives.


  • Metaphorist
    February 1, 2008

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    Not scary. I was thinking the same thing the other day about myself. With maturity, you become an altered version of yourself. It's not a bad thing as long as the core stays intact (morals, etc.).
    Nice write!

  • Poco Loco
    January 3, 2008

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    Nice write! You gripped a kinda spookiness and sadness together making a really gripping write.
    Love the style you've used and i think it was all in all a very powerful write.
    in anwser to your question...you are exactly the person you want to be. Don't change yourself for the outside world. be the person that truelly lives in your heart.
    xxx

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