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Hope

I am the morning after
A new begining
Bringing seeds
Of faith and Love
To a dawning of a new era
I am Hope and
Love everlasting


I give falcon's rest
And seagulls
Their storms to best
I grant wishes
To dreams
And make miracles
Come true

Where else may the weary
Gain strength
What else can
Bring reason for courage
What more than faith
Is needed
For life
All is LOVE and HOPE

A children song
With no words
Just melodies
Fills the emptiness
Of all space and time
As they wonderfully
Believe
These are the things
I bring

I realease in the lights
Of the Northern sky
The Aurora Borealis (The Arctic Falcon)
A Silence
For the whispering Springs
Of life

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  • Kiddy
    January 7, 2008
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    Excellent write...

    It's deep and thoughtful in its meaning....
    This poem has potential...
    It's filled with very good imagery, Metaphor and personifications... Final stanza hit me hard - loads of hope it talks about -

    I really loved the lines
    "The Aurora Borealis
    Silence
    For the whispering Springs
    Of life"

    - A Spring of hope

    Thanks for sharing

    Love
    - Kiddy


  • SarahLea-lost poet
    January 3, 2008
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    Love this poem. You're great...keep it up

    S.L.


    • aArticfalcon
      January 3, 2008
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      Your strength

      Dont give away your treasures to those who do not edify you...Your kindred spirit, your peace and understanding for they are your strength...Plant your dreams in fertile soil and watch they will blossom.