I am the morning after
A new begining
Bringing seeds
Of faith and Love
To a dawning of a new era
I am Hope and
Love everlasting
I give falcon's rest
And seagulls
Their storms to best
I grant wishes
To dreams
And make miracles
Come true
Where else may the weary
Gain strength
What else can
Bring reason for courage
What more than faith
Is needed
For life
All is LOVE and HOPE
A children song
With no words
Just melodies
Fills the emptiness
Of all space and time
As they wonderfully
Believe
These are the things
I bring
I realease in the lights
Of the Northern sky
The Aurora Borealis (The Arctic Falcon)
A Silence
For the whispering Springs
Of life
A contest entry
- A good Lyric by Kiddy.
385 points, ended January 7, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent write...
It's deep and thoughtful in its meaning....
This poem has potential...
It's filled with very good imagery, Metaphor and personifications... Final stanza hit me hard - loads of hope it talks about -
I really loved the lines
"The Aurora Borealis
Silence
For the whispering Springs
Of life"
- A Spring of hope
Thanks for sharing
Love
- Kiddy
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Love this poem. You're great...keep it up
S.L.
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Your strength
Dont give away your treasures to those who do not edify you...Your kindred spirit, your peace and understanding for they are your strength...Plant your dreams in fertile soil and watch they will blossom.
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