Better then me?
So this is who you say makes your heart skip a beat?
The one who brings a smile to your face?
The girl who makes your life perfect?
Tell me how is she better then me?
You say she keeps you up all night just to talk.
You say her laugh is just so cute.
You say her eyes sparkle like glitter
Well hunni,
You said that about me to.
So tell me,
Is she really better then me?
Or is she your new toy?
Because hunni you said all that stuff about me.
So tell me.
This is who is better then me?
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600 points, ended January 23, 2008, 26 entries
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yes, wow. Many people are put in this situation, and it's very confusing to deal with, and can be heartbreaking too. But we have to learn to make the best of a bad situation, think of it this way, if he's saying the same stuff to a different girl, than he probably wasn't worth it in the first place. Great poem !
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wow i love this its is uber incredible the emotion is definetly there and i have a friend who reminds me of this poem ecactly so amazing work and keep it up i love how you told a story and how there seemed to be a good amount of anger and sadness
this is my faviorite part
"So tell me,
Is she really better then me?
Or is she your new toy?"
these lines are amazing and definetly relatable so i just have to say great job and thanks for entering
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