If things were ever easy for me it would be the first in a while
trying hard to get what i want but it's like trying to dry the Nile,
The day things get easy i will know that i did right
because as of this moment i am trying with all my might,
Love for a child is strong, my parents try to ignore you
but love for a mate is stronger, that way they'll never forget you,
the world knows that my feelings are here and they will always show
the love flows from my heart and into the air it will go,
it travels down the street passing by all those who feel it
it travels into a broken heart and our love for each other will heal it,
the world will see that it can't stop me from being with the one i love
my family might be big but i rely on god up above,
he'll guide me to through this wicked world so i can see your loving face
he'll help us run the race to the finish and in first we will place.
Love is strong. I might only be 18 but i know what love is, i know how it feels, and i can't wait to tell her face to face that i love her.
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Wow...
In reading this you left me speachless you are tallented... keep the pen to the paper (so the speak) your poems are lovely.
-Never known
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you have good rythmes.
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Once again an AMAZING poem. I wish I had inspiration such as yours. Just one comment is that to supposed to be there? It sounded funny.
he'll guide me [to] through this wicked world so i can see your loving face
Your rhymes were pretty good and flowy.
*sigh*
Nakatrea
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You will always win when you put your faith in a higher power. Everything will just fall into place with love no matter how young you are. Great write!
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This is a beautiful write. Emotional, sweet, and a catchy title :]
keep up the wonders
-+fangirl+-
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Love Triumphs
The opposition makes it hard to see through to the good in our situation. Your parents may not agree, but with our persistence they'll see. Sometimes, i know, it feels like we're up against all odds, but "relying on God up above" will help us see this through. I know it.
I'm no good at picking titles, but if you like it then feel free to use it. lol.
We'll make it through my love. Be strong.
*Muah* SweeterThanFiction
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Very Beautiful...aw
PoeticButterfly
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Beautiful imagery and very sweet. Nice write.
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thank you all for your comments i really appreciate the support, hey us youngsters have big hearts too fogwolf. lol
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How wonderful and so sincere. Whoever she is she is a lucky girl. I must say I am suprised that such a heartfelt well thought-out poem could come from one of 18. However, after reading the rest of your writings, I was not suprised at all anymore. Great job. ^.^
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Very nice indeed! Heartfelt words poured out... words of strength and hope and love! Great write!
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great!
this is so good. i hope everythings go's well with her. great job great job big bro
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