i would love to create -
a jazz band, or a symphony.
a melody or a meaningful soul.
attempt layers of discarded chords
then flatten and bind
in a delicate tune.
woven from the holes in my soul
lifting a pain,
high up
free to soar and lift its own faults
in a song of freedom.
Author notes
i think not. my first bit of writing in 2008. it's shit. but i've been thinking a lot about making music lately, maybe this is the year for it.
A contest entry
- Musician by vertigo beat.
850 points, ended January 16, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
masterpiece?
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really good.
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hmm. This is cool, yeah sometimes I imagine what my music wuld sound like if I could create it. Maybe an orchestra or just a band or maybe a group of wierd things from around the house with a pretty singer. Some neat thoughts here.
xoo -
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this is not shit.. its beautiful.
lovely really.
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this
is music
♥
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