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Song

The butterflies sing her a song.
Better than the one she gave them.
With it's sad melodies,
And long mournful notes.
The strings of her violin,
That only know one tune,
Cannot match what she hears.
So she is grateful

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I loved the picture and it just came to me, such as it is.

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 4, 2008

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    wow ~ stunning imagery but unfortunately the word limit is sixteen. Let me know if you edit - have started judging now though.


    • Ancient-Sylph
      January 4, 2008
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      Crap oh well at least you thought it was good I'll enter another one of yours(and follow the rules next time lol)