... violin’s breath
fades into
nature, as harmony
combines into
eternal memory...
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Author notes
Nature and the violin allows me to breathe in the past.
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A contest entry
- 100 poems, more points to come! by katie-jo.
900 points, ended January 18, 2008, 42 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - personal favorite by Virgoan.
2000 points, ended June 9, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah.
As I predicted -- Gold! Congratulations, Frans, how beautiful a poem!
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Oooooo......
So ethereal! I love this. Short sweet & to the point! The poem fits the pix to a T. This just takes my breath away. So otherworldly. Now I can like a baby! Thx. Nice Wasn't expecting this!
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This is soft and quite lovely.
The flow is wonderful and it has
an almost whimsical feel to it.
Thank you for entering!
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Nice.
Nicely written, though I'm not a huge fan of it, it's pretty good. Thanks for entering, and there is something you need to put in your authors notes, please look in the rules to find it! -
This is superb, absolutely beautiful. It's so down-to-earth and simple, but at the same time breaks open so many thoughts in my mind. Definitely a finalist.
Thank you for entering and all the best in the contest.
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Oh? My picture inspired you? How wonderful is that?
This is great, and very short and sweet. It's very earthly and into nature!
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This is just breath taking Fran,
i love how you combined your wonderfull words.
Dolores x
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I agree with Myra...this is beautiful and soulful poetry, Frans. The music of this violin lingers!
~ Nicolette
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ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!
I loved the lyrical elements in this poem, and the meta-physical intent. It is pure joy to read your work.
GOLD HERE.
Love
Myra
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