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Knowledge Thief

Warning sounds, the book slaps shut
Time to go
Time to run

Lights turn off while I escape
Well I know,
That was fun.

Over the wall of ignorance
Smoothly cleared
What relief

Brain is full of precious loot
Don’t get caught
Knowledge Thief

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Lol is all I have to say.

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  • badnovocaine
    April 18, 2008

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    I like this one. Its short but explains a lot. And i really like the humor of it. Good job i look forward to reading more of your poetry.


  • thundershushed
    January 15, 2008
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    Oooh, cool idea ^^ I like the delivery. Very good job.

  • PaintedRainbows
    January 4, 2008

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    Very well written and the story is great. Now I'm feeling guilty because apparently I'm a knowledge thief, lol. You can't get locked up for that can you? Anyway, this would be one of my faves.


    • EphemeralStyle
      January 4, 2008
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      Lol I think basically everyone on this site is s a knowledge theif, actually. Thanks for the comment and applause, and I would be very happy to comment on any more of your poems

  • trickshotlemur
    January 3, 2008

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    i really like it b/c of the syllable patterns and how it is written. after reading the first stanza i was kinda confused (but that's me all the time). when i got to the end i was able to see the whole picture of someone reading a book then gaining knowledge from it. great job!!

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