She walks among your dreams
Her blood kiss salves your nightmares
The dark mistress among mortals
Our forlorn vampyric angel
A beautiful queen of the night
Trapped within a cage
But her will is indomitable
And her strength only grows with age
You want to crawl before her
You want to feel instead, her pain
To give her sweet relief
And to feel her sharp kiss again
Author notes
Doh, seems like i can only write dark things heh.
Anyway happy birthday Bri, hope you enjoy all the entries.
In a list
A contest entry
- Bri's Birthday Poetry Bash by DarkRomantic113.
400 points, ended January 11, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"You want to crawl before her
You want to feel instead, her pain
To give her sweet relief
And to feel her sharp kiss again" beautiful lines. i loved it. well done -
lol, this was nice. i like dark.
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
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lol forgot applauds
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very coool XD sweet poem
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This is really sweet, hon', and I can see that she loved it. Wonderful tribute.
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Thank you
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aww val your going to make me cry,
happy tears,
thank you sweetheart,
i loved it,
it was really good,
*hugs you*
love Bri
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Heh thanks Bri glad you like it. But just wait 'til you see the other entries, they're all much better lol. Anyway, enjoy.
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