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Golden vision

Passing through the keleidescope of the world,
coinciding with the colors of the nation.
Power in unity, bring forth tranquillity.

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Prompt..Humanity...30 words or less

My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*

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  • stavykm gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    I love this

    What a beautiful poem. I love keleidescopes. The colors are brilliant. Yes the power of unity in our world and nation does bring tranquillity. Excellent poem and so much said in so few words. Thank you for sharing this with me. Good luck in the contest!!
    God Bless
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Prison of Lyme
    January 4, 2008
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    sweet

    very calming


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    Nice take on the prompt...powerful words of truth...we are all cut from the same mold and created in same image...it would do us all good to remember this.
    Thank you for the thoughts and entry.
    mystic