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The Witness

& he said "I don't believe in love."
so she said:
I believe it because I've seen it,
looking for the moon in your eyes
& never worrying that I wont find it

It's kissing lips you always know you'll kiss again,
when there's something there between them that you just can't explain,
you've never felt it, never held it or heard it speak,
but it basks in their shadows, licking each curve
flavor lingering in the air, so thick it seems to breathe

Then you inhale an oxygen
sweeter than you're used to
and skip a new beat
Realizing that the deepest touch
was never velvet.

Author notes

<3333 My friend's ex boyfriend said he didn't believe in love & then I just started thinking of why I believe & this is what I got....& it may not seem like an "experience" but this is wat is evoked by what I felt when I realized love is real....it was like hope no matter what it's believing that even when everything is HORRIBLE you have something to look forward to...there is more than this.

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  • MysticalRayne
    January 4, 2008
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    Excellent write - best of luck in the contest