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Always dream

Cleopatra eyes,
skin like
snow white meets a philosopher,
to lost in logical to
wait for her prince to come.
We wind,
we wait.
She dances with herself,
perfect steps.
Seceretly she dreams
that he steps with her.
But she knows that
all she does is dreams,
and dreams are thoughts and
those can wander.
She sings of love and loss,
only relizing now that she
has never truley known love.
Only long, drawn out passion,
and a quick little fire thats
sadly dying.
But there is one that
she relizes she loves.
Not the one that woes her,
but she will always dream.

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Thoughts, and my relationship status and state

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    January 10

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    Wow. That was beautiful. I loved the softness of it. I love how this is like a memory/dream/cry all in one. You did a fantastic job on this.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • EncounteredEpiphany
    February 29, 2008
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    Great write...

    Has dramatic flow...

    I could really envision your metaphor

    Salute!