Username01:I love you.
The words appear on the screen
In a little IM box.
Someone I never seen
Never seen, but talked to.
Share with when I was deaf
I love you
I type.
Mouse on the send button.
To someone I never seen.
Never seen, but called,
With tears in my eyes and pain in my throat.
Username02:I love you.
Here comes my reply.
I sit an wait for him to type.
Someone I never seen,
Never seen, but loved,
Like he loved me.
A contest entry
- Two Year Celebration by Kari.
1800 points, ended June 9, 2008, 13 entries
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My life.
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This is sweet.ne e can happen. I had two relationships that started out just talking on the internet. Thank you for sharing your poetry with me.
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i love this one .. nd i can totally relate to .. i think a lot of us can as well ..
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Beautiful...
an internet love story...
I love it, and it does hit close to home too.
someone you never saw but talked to...
someone you never saw but called...
someone you nevr saw but loved...
I love this piece...and I love you.
thanks for sharing.
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This has taken my breath away. I really like this. Amazing how you put these words together. Very interesting.
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An internet lovestory.....nice work here...Love it.
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wow
wow, do I know what you're going through!! been there, done that! this was very well written and I loved it. good job
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Just...stunning
Simplistically amazing.
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Wow.. this was just beautiful. The story, the expression. Something modern, and strong.. Beautifully written.
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thumbs up!
This was very interesting. Until someone every meets another person online they don't understand the pure honesty and purity of the experience.
This was a pretty awesome write. I look forward to ready more of your works.
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...creepy online dating never works
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very good
A modern love story
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Loved it, really show that love can be found in the very unliky places and in the smallest things.
Much love
~Noor
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Made me smile ( quite the achievement, I must add)!
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4r u
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so short
but amazing
this is a true example of " big things come in small packages"
=D
good luck in life !
Anagh -
wow
great poem.....very heart felt and well writen....i liked it very much
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so true....:
"Never seen, but called,
With tears in my eyes and pain in my throat."
exactly....you nailed this feeling perfectly well done
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a LOT of people can relate to this, it is truly a powerful and awesome write, and it hits close to home for me...not sure why, i've had this feeling, and so have many friends...
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This is great. Powerful. Very well done.
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Amazing.
I...know how this feels,
you did great at describing
this emotion,the feeling,
everything,
and I admire you for that.
...Simply Me♥
P.S God Bless you. -
This was really nice. It hits home to a lot of people I believe.
Kari
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I loved it, seriously. For some reason, it hits me close... like if that was also part of my. I loved the three last lines, one of the most beautiful expressions of love for me.
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wow this is lovely, i love the style it seems detached yet so much emotion is in it ,its realy good :-)
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This poem is so beautiful & precious if you ask me. You did a marvelous & astounding job with this poem. God bless you always in each & every thing you do and write and keep up the excellent work.
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