My captain, for you I serve
My love, I give my heart
This love we do deserve
With passion we never part
My captain, my love
My protector, my friend
Soulmates through heavens above
Forever we're together, til the end
My captain, my love, for you I give my life
My captain, my love, make me your wife
Torn apart, never again shall our souls part
You're my soulmate forever in my heart
My captain, my love,
Till death do we part
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to my dearest love
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Beautifully penned ! Romantic and touching !!
Thank you for sharing Christina , a lovely write
and a pleasure to read .. Happy Thanksgiving
to you & you have a great day !
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the repetition here makes this strong. I really like the rhyme and flow to this as well.
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I like the repetition here. It seems to go with the gentle flow of love here. I so do love a good love story in the form of poetry. Great read. ~gypsy~
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Lovely!
Well put! i love it! its short and cute!!
-V.A.S.H
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nice write
short and simple.
cute words spreading here and there
thanks for sharing
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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you have the heart of an ocean!
well done poetess!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen/Seattle
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Sincerely moving
This reads very well and conveys the intensity of love. May I make one suggestion for your profile and this page- the black/ dark backgrounds make reading the light type quite difficult for the reader.
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What a sweet little ditty
But so short its a pity
The nautical element was great
As love fits anywhere, refusing to wait
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Hi Cristina ! A pleasure to read this most
charming and romantic poem !! Brought
a smile to my day for sure . A delight to
read thank you !!
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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wow this is really sweet and the background actually matched ^_^ I don't see that often Great write
Thank you so much for entering my contest,
And Good Luck!
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Very sweet
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this made em think of the wife of a sea captain writing him poetry while e was off on a sea mission. I liked it.
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aww, this is very sweet and romantic, lovely poem and congrats on the hm. take care,
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What a great read! That love in here, one I know well. And you know, even in death, the hearts are still one. May be apart physically, but when love is true, it still seeps into ones heart after they are parted by death.
Best of luck in this contest!
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thanks for the comment and the luck! what you said about love it true, very true. i'm glad and greatful for what i have. it's not easy, but it's worth it!
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touching yes, reminds me alot of the days of pirates and lost times. though I would go as far to say this could of been inspired by a movie in which th backround is based off of, or for a true love.
write and we shall read. ususally
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you are right on all counts. i could've even been thinking about a past life. thanks as always for the comment
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This is such a touching piece, your rhyme and flow is wonderful. And thanks for the occassion to see Johnny Depp, very nice!
♥
whisper
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thanks!
thank you for your words, i enjoyed your comment. glad i could give you a glimpse of johhny depp. to be quite honest the poem is about my fiance but i really wanted to use the background, so i got twice inspired for this poem.
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A very sweet piece of devotions. Interesting rhyme scheme, with emphasis on who rests in your heart. Nicely done!
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appreciated kindness
always appreciated your words. your poems are wonderful and i appreciate your comments. i hope you get to read and comment on more of my work. i'm a big fan of yours and will have to comment on yours more often. thanks again!!!
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Awwwwwwww this is soo sweet and nice!!!!!! hehe =) Very good!
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sweet!
thanks! sweet of you to say.
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OOOH wouldnt johnny depp Be the best captain.
Love the background the font color seemed a little bright but I understand sometimes it is hard to find colors that will show up on some backgrounds.
Love it all the same... Well done.
Delila
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delighted!
johnny depp is a great actor and i loved him in the pirate trilogy (btw rumors of a 4th???) he's got a great singing voice too (hope you heard or saw him in sweeney todd) as for the font color i had a dredful time trying to pic one...this light blue seemed best to go with the dark background color...do you think i should keep it or try harder to get a different one? anyways.... thanks again!
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Wonderful background,suits the piece!
The poem itself is very lovely and heartfelt...
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thank you for your comment, i appreciate your thoughts.
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beautiful! your captain must be very lucky.
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very lucky
we're both very lucky.. our past relations were bad and with each other we have finally made it---we're officially engaged! we just have a great connection and this poem brings it into light.
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awwww...your dearest love
is going to feast upon this treasure you wrote for him.
It sounds a bit like a ballad too!
Congrats on having such a sweet love and soulmate to
enjoy!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : )))
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love your sweetness
i love your sweet comments...i'm officially engaged to him and he was very pleased with this poem... he's not really into poetry but he loves mine. i believe we are soulmates mostly because anytime we fight, we can't stay mad and we always find a way to patch things up, been thru alot and don't think anything could drive us apart.
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this is such a beautiful write that is written with such deep heartfelt emotions. i loved this well done
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glad you enjoyed it...thanks
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This is really sweet!
A great background you chose for this
one! Great job and thanks a lot for
sharing it with us all here!
Jeremy0826
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sweetness
i'm glad that you thought my poem was sweet. i'm also glad tht you enjoyed it. you're right, by the way. i basically got my inspiration for this poem from this background, the movie, and from my fiancee.
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What a beautiful piece this was. "You're my soulmate forever in my heart". I was smiling with each line that I read. I love the sea and this gave me images of a woman as she watched her man heading off to sea. As soulmates you would live to serve each other. Wanting to make each other the happiest person on this earth. Thank you for sharing this poem with me and keep writing poet. So beautiful. seamaiden ♥
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so glad my poem brought you happiness and you got a piece of my inspiration...hopefully it gave you some inspiring too!
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