S howing the confidence..."yeah! I am the Best!"
H azel eyes speak it all
U nmistakable dream, to rise atop
V alued living...the efforts in
I nstinctive wish..."ah! if she could be here..."
Author notes
Just thought wud enter sumthin after such a looonnnnggggg time....
A contest entry
- Behind These Hazel Eyes EXTENDED. by shuvi.
300 points, ended January 6, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely touching piece, My dear MM, I love this, and I love you.. Missing ya, Thanks for entering, Lots and lots of love and cheers, shuvi
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WOW!!!
luuuuved it.. its soo beautiful.. well, the poem has to be good when it has such a wonderful subject all the best in the contest
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tum dono bandar pagal ho! poem ke baare mein baat nahi kar skte?!
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oh....wapas khoob bhada chadha ke tareef kar dee is weird si piece...thx yaar..waise personally speackin, only subject is achchha..lol!!!
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What is SHUVI? It's a nice poem, I would be interested to know the idea behind it, I like "Hazel eyes speak it all" but I do not know how it ties in =\ it's like 5 good lines put into another poem of its own o:
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wat say...now????
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Well you're off to a good start with this piece. Good write and good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing your work.
Jen
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