Materials plush,
woven with care.
Extacy to the arch,
impressions of each step,
within the comfort of ones haven.
Author notes
Prompt, 30 words or less on "RUG"
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended January 3, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
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very nice
a lot of thought in only a few words. Great job and congrats on the silver! The Shaker (thanks for being so kind as to leave a comment on my works!)
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oohh...I needed this one today...
very well done...
wish I could roll my spirit across a plush rug as in your poem...LOL
congrats on the silver...
great job!
Blessings! Tammy
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Congrats on the silver. I liked the feeling of comfort and opulence that this poem gave me.
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Very well done...nothing like heaven on the feet that walk on plush carpet...mostly on a cold winter day...Nice work.
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Write on..
*PEACE*
Happy New Year!
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Love the first stanza, the second, line 1 I don't understand the use of arch sorry simple me. Just learning this stuff lol. Excellent take of the prompt I wish you the best of luck.
Cara
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