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One

Oh is hard to ponder here,

 

 

rack my brain from ear to ear.

 

 

One question is allowed,

 

 

to ask this Oracle this wizard,

 

 

the past and future clear to him.

 

 

looking at the stars wonderingly,

 

 

A question forms beyond all others.

 

 

Walking up quiet bravely Whisper in his ear,

 

 

Will we have peace on earth this year?

 

 

The Oracle This wizened old wizard,

 

 

lifts his staff and fire appears,

 

 

He shouts out loud and clear,

 

 

No peace on earth this year!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rheea 'just one'

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  • Ithica silver member
    January 3

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    You show symptoms of being a humanitarian! We would all be hopeful of the desired answer, but I don't think many would be surprised by this answer? So sad! Best of luck in the contest...


  • Playjazz66 silver member
    January 3

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    Well I love your entry, the question and it even came in the form of a rhyme. Gee, why did you have to use all past years as a guide and give the oracle's reply?
    Good luck in the contest!
    Jim
  • Nighttime angel
    January 3
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    well I like the question you asked. it's a good one. too bad the answer isn't yes. that would make life a lot easier huh? don't worry sister pot, my first entry was a poem, not just a simple question. I felt so dumb...
    finally figured out what Tarja wanted, removed the old one, put in a new one.

    great question...

    kat


  • Ashleigh London
    January 2

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    Will we have peace on earth this year?

    That is so Miss America! Not bad though. I would personally try to stick to a question about my life. I mean for one reason because I know "peace" is far beyond the grasp of humanity. And besides... if the answer is no... which it most likely would be... that would feel horrible you know? But yeah thank you for entering and in the form of a poem! It was very well written.
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