Waiting patiently for the snow to fall
Into thick fur coats and mittens we jump
Necks warm with colorful scarves and collars
Thick and fluffy are our blankets and sheets
Everybody snuggled close by the fireplace
Reaching for cups of freshly made hot chocolate
Watching intently out the window
Opening our eyes to a lovely scene
Nature is always at its very best this time of the year
Deer and rabbits run freely through the fields
Each one finding their own place to feed
Ravaging through plants and flowers
Life here seems like such a dream
Always brings a smile to everyone's heart
Now that the snow is beginning to fall
Dive in and go for a ride on your sled
Open up that new set of skis you received
Freefall down the icy slopes and hillsides
Find a friend and enjoy the view with them
Up above the world so high you stand
Now and forever in this winter wonderland of fun
A contest entry
- Winter by AJ Morelli.
1000 points, ended January 23, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i'm speechless...
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Jeremy, I have tried and tried to do this form..but it always comes out..well, not good, lol. Love the wonderland you've painted.


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wow..
yep.. winter wonderland of fun- it reads that all the way down the side..
that is so funny- how do you do it?


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Excellent poem Dear you did such a wonderful job with this acrostic, I wish you the best of luck in the contest



Cara





