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Please Don't Blink

Isn't amazing
With a blink of an eye
You can lose the one
You love with all your heart
Your world is turned upside down
All because one silly feeling
You don't even know is real
Yet, you jumped on it
When you should have forgotten it
Could this happen to anyone
Could this happen me
Can I lose the love of my life
With a blink of an eye
Over something so false
Something so silly, so unrealistic
Tell me I won't ever lose you
Please don't blink

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  • Hecate616
    January 23, 2008
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    I love the last line.
    Its a very nice poem and true to me.