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I’d give you the world if I could hold it in my hand
I’d buy you the finest things of this land
I’d never leave you alone in the night
I’d promise to be there

I’d walk with you and talk with you and might even sing
I’d stand with you in the pouring rain
I’d always be there when you needed me
I’d promise to be there

I’m easy to please and it’s easy to laugh
I’m always open to try what you ask
I’m there at the bottom in case that you fall
I’ll catch you before you know what’s going on

I’ll give you everything I have to give
I’ll make sure you’re happy as long as I live
I’ll fight away the tears when they come
I’ll fight away your fears when they come

I’m not asking for much at all…
I’m not asking for what can’t be done
I’ll promise I’ll be there for you…
If you’ll make that promise too

Author notes

its been a while since i've written anything, and i would like for you to see what i'm thinking. its nothing great at the moment but i'm going to try and put some form to it. comments and suggestions are welcome. just be honest.

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  • As Autumn Falls
    March 29, 2008

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    Wonderful

    AHHH MIKE!!! It's great. Please do finish it! It is very sweet...

    It's been a long time. I'm glad to see that you're still writing, however sporadically. College and work takes time away from my endeavors.