Reality is a protective mist
The covers the insureity inside
While we are covered we are alright
We keep our craziness inside
Locked deep within our trembling skin
We are normal, we are alive
But if the distressing wind
Blows our protective mist away
Insanity will become reality
It will rule our waking days
Author notes
Prompt ~Reality is the shell of insanity
i hope this is ok mummy
i love you
A contest entry
- Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
525 points, ended January 2, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW ! um wow amazing angel.this is an amazing write baby,i can feel it inside i love it.I love you
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this is beautiully written with truth andpowerful words which holds alot in them. well done sis and keep penning
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the winds blow everything down
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Very nicely written. I thought I might have seen a few spelling mistakes, but I still enjoyed it.
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This is a very nice take on the prompt sweety thank you for your entry goodluck to you in this contest best wishes and much love
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This is excellent!!
A mighty fine piece of poetry with great imagery and metaphor used
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