Friendship is suposed to be
the greatest thing
in life because
we tell friends everything
that we cant tell family
we share lots of time
together,but
friendship can suck
when you are abused
or when you are stabbed
in the back by your
so called "best friend"
they just stop talking
to you all together
then they suddenly need
you to be there for them
when they were not there for you
you dont know what to do
so you go to who you think is
the only person that understands you
and you cry, you cry because you
dont know what to do
then you find that many other friends
do care about you and want to help,
you get another person to talk to
and some advice like dont take her crap
and just walk away or fight back
you cant because you've been friends
forever, and you still dont know what to do
finally you realize that
with out her you are much better off
you still have us as you friends
Author notes
Type 4- Friendship
A contest entry
- Types Of Love(NEED TYPE 1 BEFORE JUDGING) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 31, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great emotions for type four. I know these feelings ohh too well.
Love this part:
then you find that many other friends
do care about you and want to help,
you get another person to talk to
and some advice like dont take her crap
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dude thats really good
is that about steph or something?
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You reached for those deepest emotions that are brought out from such an event and clearly explained it to the audience. Straight forward; to the point. Love the ending, because it shows that even in tough times, there can always be a little light.
Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck!
Marluxia
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i like it its good try taking some of the words out lie the and and but other then tht i thnk its great. ttyl
love you<333
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