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Suffer to Die Pt. 2

Everybody's got to suffer in life.
Look at the pain and the stress in my eyes,
thestruggles in my life; realize reasons I suffer in life.
Suffer to breath, so I suffer to try, that'swhy I stay high,
mind fried; thinkn, I suffer to die.
I'm so alone, my mind is gone, I'm lost in a world
where doing right seems to be wrong. Any day could
be the day for me to get my head blown, but I rely
on myprayers and I keep my faith strong. So
many people live they life just to suffer, how do they
manage in a society that just wants us to suffer. What
must we do in this world to be free from all of the
chaos, mayhem, murder, greed, death, and disease.
I'm a part of the streets andthis shitis bothering me.
Because I suffer to try.
Look at the pain and the stress in my eyes,
thestruggles in my life; realize reasons I suffer in life.
Suffer to breath, so I suffer to try, that'swhy I stay high,
mind fried; thinkn, I suffer to die.

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  • toomysterious
    April 17, 2008

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    Great rap beat, excellent flow. Really don't know where you ever ran across my poems, but glad you did as I am enjoying yours very much.


  • quack silver member
    January 12, 2008
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    this is well good


  • Expression
    January 3, 2008
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    absoulutely mind blowin...das all i can say


  • MahoganyFlow
    January 3, 2008

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    Absolutely love the title. It intrigues the reader to want to find out the meaning behind it. Love how you bought the begining and the end together. Almost like a song...could be anyway...This must have been something fresh off of your mind b/c you type it so fast that you didn't see all the typos you have in there. But it's cool we all do it. Loved the insight on this though. Keep Writing!


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    January 2, 2008
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    damn good write babe

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