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Golden Dance...

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Magical artistry in nature 

as leaves turn into gold

 

Nature's metamorphosis'

colorful palette

of reds, orange,

and gold;

skillful manipulation of

brisk weather settling in.

 

In it's own way

always startling.

 

Intricate veins in each leaf

a soft shimmering gold

subtle folds, soft curves;

turning, dancing, inviting. 

 

Leaves transforming sunlight

into soft tones of golden embroidery,

silk-like threads

of shimmering reflections

take my breath away;

as they metamorphose

into graceful dancers.

 

Bouncing moonlight shadows

through tree lined streets 

at times dancing

along with 

diamond like rain drops. 

 

Breath-taking dance

of majestic, perfection. 

 

Elegant patterns

envelope tree-lined streets

kissing it's landscape with

with graceful dance,

mocking me; 

as if saying

"Dance the last dance for me" 


Beautiful memories

of an Autumnal frost.

 

 

 


 

 

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  • klassy lassy gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    When fall comes with its burnished colors and sunlight, the word "fall" becomes a verb, and we do-- headlong into its dance of shimmering veils that cover the earth and bid summer goodbye with a flourish! Your descriptions are so easy to visualize.


  • MargaretG silver member
    January 13, 2008
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    Autumn is lovely, especially described by someone who loves it as you do. I noticed several repetitions of words: gold, metamorphose, dance; which could be deliberate, or you could consider using more synonyms.
    Thank you for bringing these images to our contest.

  • Mystical-Gardenia
    January 10, 2008

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    Delightful, refreshing! Brava!!

    Thank you for entering this contest and your patience as we awaited the other contestants; all so greatly appreciated.

    Such elegance and style; here you have created a vision in your rhythmic imageries for the reader to revel in all of the glories of natures Autumn; as a painter’s pallet filled with magical colors here you breathe life and color our world with vibrant imageries! Brava!

    Have a glorious New Year!

    ~Myst~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 3, 2008

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    nature in the eyes of a poet, there is nothing like it. true beauty that i think is amazing each time you read it or you see it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

  • Heavenly Angel
    January 2, 2008
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    Beautifully written, sweetie
    A fine sharing into this contest!
    I wish you all the very best!
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